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i dont understand the storyline, improve the graphics newgrounds has way too many sprite flashes, good flash for ur first time
Lman 3000
Author's Response:
Yeah, I agree there are a lot of sprite flashes, but to be quite honest, I'm lacking in the art department. Technically, this is my third, the other two didn't quite make it, and I'm still hoping for this one. Although I put a LOT more effort into it than the previous two.
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add sound, improve the storyline and graphics, make sure u can die to make it a challange
Lman 3000
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i cant get it to die tell me if u no how
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You will be suprised how many new authors don't include a reply button, it gets anoying. A very good flash improve the graphics (they were good though) maybe next eopside include a story line? it is good without one just giving u a sugestion
Lman 3000
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you guys are talented but it went way to fast!! i couldnt keep up
Lman 3000
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too much stuff hapening at once, maybe make it into a series? i am not sure though
Lman 3000
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(srry if i sounde mean i am just trying to help) needs sound, the subtitles blend in with the back ground (not good) and it needs a play button and a reply button, but this is a good flash, u got some skills i will like to see more from u
Lman 3000
Author's Response:
Thank you for the feedback it is greatly appreciated. In the future I am taking into consideration the advice everyone has told me.
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no srry graphics wernt gd, but nice anmation aprat from that
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Thanks for the review anyway Iman3000
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srry i close it halfway through (by acident) and didnt see if u had a reply button, but it is a very gd flash, i would like to see more. I sugest include a storyline so it isnt confuseing
Lman 3000
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thanks! I know i should've sotry boarded first.. but i never did this kind of thing before! Next time!
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this is a gd flash but i think u should add the origanal and this version so people can compare it, there both great
Lman 3000
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Thank you, I hope you think that the added bits made the overall movie better.
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the only thing i think you can include is that sometimes the background noise is louder then the guy speaking, so u cant hear him speaking, but great flash
Lman 3000
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True. I'll have to work on that.
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